Original Song - Tantalizing Paradise

I wrote this song a while back, but i never uploaded it. In fact, this recording is from April 30th 2010. I played this song in my high school talent show, taking third place. Not bad, i guess. I hope to get a better version of it out sometime. Anyway, thanks for watching.
--dikk

Have some lyrics:

My eyes are burning today
Cause the thought of you won't go away
And i can't go on like this
And i'm not planning to stay
No i plan to move so far away
That i'll never see you again

Chorus:
Time is of the essence
Your plans keep falling through
And just a word to the wise:
It'll all come down on you
If you don't wise'n up
if you don't play your cards right
if you don't use your head
if you don't make the best of life

I think it's time you start acting your age
grow up realize it's all okay
and the earth will continue to spin
now don't be afraid
take a breath, relax, wait for the day
the world's not going to end

Chorus

Breakdown: (X3)
Bide your time, take it slow
speed it up, don't let it go
Come on strong to break the ice
Tantalizing Paradise
Paradise

Chorus

Special thanks to Dean Moyer. A buddy of mine that gave me the idea for this song. Without him it wouldn't exist. Thanks holmes.

Here's a video of Dean and Brok, two of my buddies singing and playing. Enjoy:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uerefgDLyVA&feature=related

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[DeanMoyerMusic]

Dude i really miss ya. This is phenomenal! :)

I can't say enough how much I appreciate your music man and you are a huge inspiration to me and my music! Thank you.

And also that little comment in the description means the F'ing world to me thank you so much man!

[NerdLifeForLife]

@DeanMoyerMusic No problem, Dean. Miss you too. Come to my grad party. On the tenth [=

[MsLaterDays]

awesome :)

[Ursa88]

ok I don't care that I'd prolly have to do a shipment order in order to get it from USA, if you ever brought out a CD I would buy it for this song.

[NerdLifeForLife]

@1331gofish lol thanks so much

[DeanMoyerMusic]

@NerdLifeForLife I'll be there! what time? and I wrote a song buddy, can't wait for you to hear it!

[NerdLifeForLife]

@skateorstrum Thanks, man.