First Draft Fail #92

http://www.HowToReviseYourNovel.com

A recently rescued princess and her companions meet a mysterious stranger in the woods... and they all have more in common than one might expect.

Written and Directed by Paige R.

Starring various members of the FA
with special guest star Holly's Dad as The Hermit

Music & Sound Effects
1) Winter Wood (cc) - composed and performed by Paige R. (recorded and mixed using Garage Band)
2) Mystery Accents 02 - iLife Sound Effects
3) Mastermind - iLife Sound Effects
All other sound effects recorded by Paige R.

I'm very sorry it's so fuzzy. I spent a week trying to upload it at a higher quality, to no avail.
My heartfelt thanks goes out to the everyone who helped to bring this project to life - for their time and their enthusiasm; for their acting talent; for the use of their props, costumes, and various skills; and, of course, for their delightful company.
Long live the inestimable, the inimitable, the incorrigible FA!

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[TheFantasticFA]

950 views on this thing? CRAZY!

[Inkling2B]

lol. DUH. nice vid. I'll vote on the website too I guess. where was that filmed?

[TheFantasticFA]

@Inkling2B

Giant City State Park in Illinois.

You'd probably like to know, for future reference, that whenever the video poster chooses to publish the information (which, in this case, I have), you can see it under "Statistics & Data." That button is right under the sharing options when you view the video on its own page (as opposed to the channel page), and the filming location information is at the bottom left.

[scaryname73]

You have my vote!

[TheFantasticFA]

@scaryname73

Thank you, I appreciate it!

[klee010795]

Well excuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuse me, princess.

XD That was win.

[TheFantasticFA]

@klee010795

Hahah. The actor was really excited to say that line. He thought it was funny too... although you don't actually get to hear him say it.

[fogmistsunshine]

This is awesome!

[MorTheGrim]

This is kick-awesome! Writers of certain television shows need to watch this so they repent of their dialogue sins. Duh!

[LauraRainbowDragon]

Congrats on your contest win!

[ldsa6378]

I voted every day :-) And it looks like you might win the Grand Prize according to the poll results. Very cool! I hope Holly announces the winners soon.

[Inkling2B]

ah, but hardly anyone ever does that anymore. I just sort of ruled out that information might have been included. anyways. I watched the other vids the other day and I think this one is definitely in the top three. The film was well done and your point well made.

[TheFantasticFA]

@mbman7

Thanks, Mike! Nice to see you here on YouTube.

[TheFantasticFA]

@ldsa6378 Thank you very much for your support! ^_^ Don't forget, you can vote once a day until Monday.