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Uploaded by on Aug 11, 2009

I OWN NOTHING!
All material goes to its right ful owner!
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I made this intro myself :D How is it ?
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Joe's arms wrap around my waist and he rocks back and forth to the rhythm of the music, which is the same beat my heart is going at.
Fast, and almost nervous.
I've never had anyone touch me the way Joe does. Light and gentle. But firm and protective.
I mean we weren't going out or anything, but it was a start.
"You ok Beth?"
I suddenly look up and see his blue eyes staring at my suspiciously.
"Fine...Yea, fine." I manage to get out.
Its not very easy to talk to someone when they take your breath away.
I look down at my feet and try not to mess anything up. Thats the last thing I need. Embarassment. Especially with him.
But, just like every fairytale story, it never lasts.
The music stops and his arms drop to his sides. He smiles and looks back up at me.
"You're a good dancer."
I smile. "Thanks. Not too bad yourself."
He lets out a quick chuckle and then I hear the ring of drums being hit echo through the entire room. A fast dance, not my specialty. Everytime I try to move like the dancers on TV, I end up injurying myself...or someone else.
A warm hand grasps mine and drags me to the middle of the dance floor.
Shit.
I feel everyones eyes piercing through my entire body, talk about being uncomfortable.
Joe starts moving in weird positions. I don't know how he does it, but he makes the most ridiculous things look hot.
I watch...I'm definetly not getting in there.
I said that WAY too fast.
Joe yanks my arm and pulls me into him. The only thing I liked about this whole situation was that he was holding me and he didn't let go.
"Uh, Joe. I can't dance."
He keeps dancing and twirling me around. "Neither can I! Just have fun!"
I don't think the definition of "fun" is making a total fool of yourself, but I guess its worth a try.
I start swaying my body to the beat of the music.
"There you go! You're already getting used to it!"
His comment only made me try harder. I moved, and moved, and moved.
I start to see people crowding around me and Joe, watching us. But this time they're not laughing. They're just watching.
I feel someones hot breath beat down on my neck. "You know, you moving around like this makes you look pretty....sexy."
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xD Good ? Bad ? Tell me. Comment please. :D

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  • looks pretty good!

  • that was amazing! [:

    loveee the introo &

    it lookss goodd so farrr! XD

  • your an awesome writer(:

    i love it:D

  • Awesomee!:D

  • OMG! that sounds amazing! POST MORE!!!!

  • i love it! :)

    you're an amaazing writer!

  • great job

  • this seems great :)

  • Seems Fantastic!

    Cant Wait!

    Lol Is It Niley and Jiley?

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