This time i focused on the words more than the flashes and stuff...
Artist : Red
Storyline:Spirit saves the herd from the puma and everyone thanks him...When the night comes,Spirit hears a noise and sees humans coming.He yells to the herd and leads them to a safe place but one of the foalls fells and gets caught by humans...Spirit's mom jells at him and throws him out of the herd..Spirit runs off but gets caught by the same humans and gets sold to the army.There he understands why he was thrown out..If he would've looked after the foal it would never been taken.Spirit is so lonely and trying to find himself.He tries to work with the colonel but he understands that that isn't him..He meets Little Creek and they escape from the military.Spirit gets along great with Little Creek but feels like something is missing.He runs off but gets caught by some railway workers.Spirit starts to miss Little Creek and frees the other horses and goes back to Little Creek..There he meets Rain.She shows Spirit a kinder side to him that he really likes.Spirit stays with Rain as Little Creeks horse. Spirit finally feels complete.
I like your storyline quite a bit ^^
Some of the clips came in juuust a tad too quickly; I suggest a simple crossfade for those kinds of clips. It lets them come in smoothly, and yet at the same time, without mess to distract you. Also, for memories and such, I suggest putting them in black and white, to show the difference :D
All in all, I really liked this video; it's refreshing to see such simplicity. ^^
AnimeVSReality 2 years ago
Thank you...I'm using WMM so i don't have many flashes so i must use simple and clean clips :D
varivalge 2 years ago