Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 10: Bridge Lyrics)

take me all the way
take me all the way
t-t-t-take me all the way
back to 1988
take me all the waaaaaaaayy....

background footage is a walk around my studio.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• rivers
• cuomo
• 80s
• radio
• weezer
• rock
• portland
• oregon

[JohnL311]

I love the changes that Rivers made to the last chorus, switching up the vocal melody, that's what I'm talking about! Great job on this project!

[taylor2d2]

rivers is the man!

[videosonny]

cheers again. I posted your bridge revised. thanks for the chance to work on your ideas. Good luck with the studio. i wish I could have a spot like that. All I got is a Imac to work with. lol

[taylor2d2]

nice job. i like the bridge you came up with. i almost think changing the music to fit woule be benefitital.

[SheridanODonnell]

The solo is so great. Especially how you mirror the chorus with the guitar. Reminds me of other Weezer's songs. Plus you add a little spice in the end. Perfecto!

[jonbashjonbash]

A few things.

a. I really dig that guitar/drum break after the first chorus. Nice change-up there.

b. I think the chorus chords on Rivers' step 10 video fit much better. I'm not sure which one of you wrote that one, but it seemed to fit the melody and such a little more.

c. I like the bridge lyrics, but like someone else mentioned, maybe make it just '88 to make the syllables fit better. I don't mind the Ozma thing.

d. I think the end only needs one of those "turnin, turnin, turnin" parts.

[YorkButler]

Hey dude, great edit! That's how I meant 'the good times roll' line to be edited in - great stuff. Must be a pretty amazing feeling to hear your backing vocals behind River's lead!

[MmmmYesss]

I really like the break with the guitar and whatnot at 1:07. pretty sick.

fo sho

[evilmegaman]

sorry for the double post, but also, man if you have some other music, I'm seriously interested. you're REALLY good. and your voice is awesome

[evilmegaman]

this sh** is SO cash

[dallakjan]

hey man, try to put this chorus in your next version!!!! and it will be perfect!!!

[kingsfan7205]

so i wrote out this huge comment but it didnt post so i will quickly recap it:

i like your chorus. especially how you only change the last one

change the date from 1988 to whenever you were born because apparently 88 is a disgrace to weezer fans

to make the breakdown fit more you could see if it fits before or after the bridge

and finally:

The self full of toy at :25 i painted that shit.

-Connor