Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 10: Bridge Lyrics)

The solo is so great. Especially how you mirror the chorus with the guitar. Reminds me of other Weezer's songs. Plus you add a little spice in the end. Perfecto!

A few things.

a. I really dig that guitar/drum break after the first chorus. Nice change-up there.
b. I think the chorus chords on Rivers' step 10 video fit much better. I'm not sure which one of you wrote that one, but it seemed to fit the melody and such a little more.
c. I like the bridge lyrics, but like someone else mentioned, maybe make it just '88 to make the syllables fit better. I don't mind the Ozma thing.
d. I think the end only needs one of those "turnin, turnin, turnin" parts.

Hey dude, great edit! That's how I meant 'the good times roll' line to be edited in - great stuff. Must be a pretty amazing feeling to hear your backing vocals behind River's lead!

I really like the break with the guitar and whatnot at 1:07. pretty sick.

fo sho

I love the changes that Rivers made to the last chorus, switching up the vocal melody, that's what I'm talking about! Great job on this project!

this sh** is SO cash

hey man, try to put this chorus in your next version!!!! and it will be perfect!!!

so i wrote out this huge comment but it didnt post so i will quickly recap it:
i like your chorus. especially how you only change the last one
change the date from 1988 to whenever you were born because apparently 88 is a disgrace to weezer fans
to make the breakdown fit more you could see if it fits before or after the bridge
and finally:
The self full of toy at :25 i painted that shit.
-Connor