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See You On the Finish Line (So Close 2) (Chapter 4)

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so guess what time it is here? guess guess! lol yep it's 3:30 in the morning. yay!! i planned on posting this much earlier but then WMM had to delete all my file folders so i had to re-edit all the video and transfer all the pictures. i love how little sleep i'm gonna get. my passport photos are gonna look horrible tomorrow. but i'm posting cause you guys did well on commenting.
*NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED. ALL CREDIT FOR THE PICTURES, SONGS, AND VIDS GOES TO THE RIGHTFUL OWNERS*
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"It's just Becca," he admitted.
I was caught a little off guard. Nick and Rebecca had been so close since they got together. While we were on break in Jersey, they were inseparable. He and I would get up every morning and go over to the Coopers' house and spend all day with our girlfriends. And even after we left, he talked about nothing but her and had this goofy smile all the time. I hadn't noticed, but looking back, I did realize that recently he had been smiling like that less and he stopped talking so much about her or just talking in general. "What happened?" I asked.
"I don't know. Things were great, but now, I don't know, she's not answering her phone ever. I haven't talked to her in weeks."
"Maybe she just misses you."
"What'd you mean?"
"Maybe she just doesn't feel like she can talk to you without hurting worse cause she misses you."
"That's stupid."
"Hey, that's what happened with me the first time I left Riley."
"Yes, and how'd that work out for you?"
"Okay, but that doesn't change the fact that people feel that way and react that way."
"I don't know though. I just have this feeling like something's wrong. Have you talked to Riley recently?"
"Yeah, a couple days ago."
"Did it seem like anything was wrong there?"
"Not that I could tell, but truthfully, we haven't really talked in depth about that kind of thing. But she hasn't mentioned anything."
"Maybe I'm crazy."
"You're just in love. Don't worry, I understand. But look, next time I talk to Riley, if you still haven't heard anything, I'll ask her about it, okay?"
"Okay, thanks Joe."
"No problem. Try not to worry. I'm sure everything's fine."
Kevin walked over. "Guys, they're ready for us again," he said.
"You okay to go?" I asked Nick quietly.
"Yeah, I could use something to get my mind off all this a bit."
I smiled and messed up his hair a little. "Let's go then."

{Riley's P.O.V.}
It had been a week, and Rebecca still hadn't told Nick, nonetheless talked to him at all. I talked to Joe every few days, and it was all I could do not to tell, but I knew I couldn't. So I kept my mouth shut and hoped Rebecca would continue to do okay until they got home. That hope was shattered one night, 3 weeks to the day until the guys were coming home, when I heard my mother shout with fear in her voice, "Blake! Riley! I need you to come down here right now!"
Blake and I both knew that voice. We knew it meant something was wrong. It didn't matter which sibling the yelling was about, we had all heard it for each of our siblings, it was always the same, so we knew to drop everything we were doing and sprint down the stairs. This time when we reached the living room, we found Rebecca sitting on the couch with her head bent over her knees and her hands over her face. Despite the tissues she was holding on her face, we could still see the massive amount of blood we assumed was coming from her nose. The tissues quickly became soaked in red and it spilled onto her hands, even dripping down to the floor. Blake and I both froze in fear, both knowing this was a very bad sign. Mom was standing over Rebecca rubbing her back and handing her more and more tissues.
Blake and I didn't know what to say or do. Finally I quietly said, "Mom?"
She looked up, surprised almost, and then looked almost relieved to see us. "Okay, kids, we need to get Rebecca to the hospital. Blake, I'm gonna need you to carry her out to the car. Riley, call Dr. Rosenberg and tell him we're going over there. Then call your father and tell him what's going on."
"Can I come?" I didn't wanna stay there alone and have no idea what was going on.
"Do you have your cell phone?"
I nodded feverishly.
"Okay, you can call from the car. Both of you put your shoes on. Let's go."
We got our shoes, and Blake lifted Rebecca up. I grabbed a box of tissues and we were off. Blake got in the back with Rebecca so I climbed into the passanger seat. As soon as we were in, Mom took off towards the ER. I handed the tissues back to Blake, who rested Rebecca's head back and placed clean tissues on her nose.
"It's okay, Bec, you're gonna be okay," he whispered as he tried his hardest to get the bleeding to stop.
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will Rebecca be okay? Will Nick find out? and what is wrong with Rebecca?
Comment and rate please!!
17 comments for the next one! and don't forget to check out Waiting to Begin chapter 9 i posted technically yesterday lol.

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  • lol nvm hahaha im sooooooo stupid lol but still if something happend i do want to know lol great stories by the by!

  • okay you get it now? lol sorry if it wasn't clear and sorry for not responding sooner. i was away.

  • how much longer will i be waiting?!? but i loved it anywho <3

  • haha not too much longer don't worry

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  • hey hey hey wait! what happend to jordan plz tell me! did they brake up did she move away i want to know im soooooooooooooo confused!

  • i hope your happy.

    you tell me to read her series.

    i do it.

    and see where you leave me?!

    i read them all in two days.

    and now im stuck! in a halt!

    having no idea what is wrong with poor becca!

    this is all your fault.

    i blame you 100%

    lol :)

  • Does she have leukemia?

    Great chapter!!!

  • oh my gosh! Please post more soon!!!!

  • HOLY CRAP! wtf is wrong :0

    omg post more!! hurry hurry hurry

  • and now you added blood to the picture!

    and you still havent told me whats wrong with her.

    so cruel lizzie. so cruel.

    lol

    awesome chapter!

  • i want to know whats wrong great chpter...postm soon!!!!

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