Naruto Fanfic - Comfort
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What did you mean when Natuto groaned when Sakura touched his mark?
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reading this makes u feel dead inside.......
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This is really good. I have a few tips if you want. At the begining, you need to explain what happened more clearly. Specify weather it was past or present and I would suggest making it Sakuras flashback. Other than that your descriptions are good and it's a good plot.
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This is really good. I have a few tips if you want. At the begining, you need to explain what happened more clearly. Specify weather it was past or present and I would suggest making it Sakuras flashback. Other than that your descriptions are good and it's a good plot.
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EPIC SWITCH INTO THE SAD MUSIC MAN VERY GOOD WITH THE STORY I HAD TO SEE MYSELF IF I COULD NOT CRY I FAILED *INSERT BEST CRY EVER AUTOTUNED AUDIO *
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that waz reat... i loved it but im cinfused still... WHY COULDNT HE TOUCH HER ON THE MARKS?!?!
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it rocked and im actually a girl not a boy a girl and im 17 years old
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not to ruin the moment or anything but at 5:00 sakura thought it was naruto's first kiss to but she saw the kiss with sasuke and naruto :P
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that's what i called unconditional LOVE!!!! name it...
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i love that at the end you still have sakura not say she is in love with him and that its just to comfort him. i totally see her brain washing herself like that.
That was great, good job. :)
T0b4k1 3 years ago 5
Amazing i about cryed it was great make more plzs!!!^^
chatterbox3344 3 years ago 5