Nowhere
One day soon
will be my last
it may not be tomorrow
but it will come
it will come fast
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the sun will rise
like any day
but it will set without me
I will be gone
but it will stay
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When I am gone
I won't be there
and some people will miss me
and yet
I'll have gone nowhere
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though my stay here
is but brief
and my days are numbered
when it's over
I won't leave
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Death's cold embrace
must be for me
the end of life's short journey
a final stop
I'll never see
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Yes, I will die,
that's common sense
it cannot be avoided
and cannot be
experienced
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What point is there
to fear what each
must journey to incessantly
but getting there
will never reach?
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We will die
and death is real
but we will never get there
and death's embrace
we'll never feel
© Pino Carafa (rozeboosje) reserves the right to be recognised as the original author of this work - 18 February 2008
Astounding penmanship and presentation. 5 stars and a fav.
And one last request: MORE!
DarkJakul 4 years ago
Thanks! And thanks for subscribing too. I post a lot of videos on dry topics, but occasionally I do post a poem. I'll do my best :-)
rozeboosje 4 years ago
This is nice. If death is real but we will never get there it must be infinitly small.
The fear of individual death is tied up with religion and the invention of the individual soul. Tribal peoples (Youtubers??) live in circular time and so their individual death is of less significance as everything else carries on. In other words immortality is other people.
auchraw 4 years ago
There is that too. But there is no real "immortality" where the individual carries on. We are going to die. But we will never "be dead". I compare it to "being on the moon". I will most probably never "be on the moon". That doesn't mean I'll spend an eternity away from the moon, it just means that I won't get there before I die. And the same is true for death. I will never "be dead" because I won't get there before I die. When I die, I cease to exist and I cannot "be" anything, including "dead".
rozeboosje 4 years ago
lovely work:-)
TheModestAgnostic 4 years ago
Cheers
rozeboosje 4 years ago