Waiting for Love
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I'm not entirely putting the pieces together. The imagery is solid and casting good, but the writing doesn't seem to go anywhere and the dialog could use some work. I would consider this a very good montage for a trailer, however. Keep up the good work.
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Glad you shared this. Might point out that it's a bit misleading as to WHAT a guy SHOULD be doing to prepare for marriage. The girl was shown doing the stereotypical homemaker-in-training sorts of activities. Are we to believe that the guy should've done the same things? :puzzled:
gbychan 2 years ago
Thanks for commenting! :)
No, the guy should not have done the same things and the girl would not have necessarily done what was included in the video. I was trying to illustrate a big issue in a very short amount of time (this was for a 3 minute video contest) and was not able to flesh it out as much as I would have liked. Someday I would love to expand it and make a longer, more complete film.
LadyAbigail90 2 years ago