PLEASE READ, please, please, pleaaaaaaase
Ok, first things first.
IT IS NOT EDWARD CULLEN!
and please, PLEASE, No 'anti-twilight' or 'I hate Edward Cullen' comments or vise versa if you 'wanna ave his babeeysss!' Please, No.
Ok :)
This is my entry to the 'Imagination of the Soul' Challenge Three - Original Character.
Storyline:
(Eeshh, I KNOW it's long but it is the story :L)
The Doctor and Rose crash land at a school - Whilst the Doctor en rolls as a teacher (Rose as a student) Rose soon notices a strange Boy taking an interest in her, an extreme interest, she soon works out the boy is not normal.
He tracks down her and the Doctor and starts to reveal his true self, he threatens them and they run off. They do some research after realising he can't be human and they find a story about something that fell to earth many years ago. Rose ponders on what the alien has been waiting for. Their pair encounter the Boy again and he tries to attack them (showing off strength by throwing the tree and speed by cornering them off) they both manage to escape.
The Boy seems to have taken a keen interest in Rose and watches her in her hotel room, he appears but the next moment he's gone. They return to school the next day knowing the Boy can't do anything to reveal himself. Rose knows he's watching her and walks off, he soon follows. He corners her again and tells her that SHE'S the one he's been waiting for - for what she doesn't know yet.
Whilst in school the Doctor does some more research and finds key words like 'strength' 'speed' etc, things they have seen during their encounters with the Boy. The Doctor worries where Rose is and calls her but she doesn't answer. More worried, he continues to try and name the alien the Boy is and after coming across more words like , 'immortal' and 'drank blood' he soon realises he's a vampire. Images of panic flash across the Doctor's mind of the Boy drinking Rose's blood.
Meanwhile the Boy and Rose are alone and, Rose thinks he's waited for her to love, kisses him. The Doctor finds them and watches them kiss before running off heartbroken and annoyed. But after pulling away from Rose the Boy reveals his true identity to her - a monster. He knocks her unconscious after she screams. The Doctor hears and runs straight to find the Boy and demand from him where Rose is. The Boy simply laughs and they both run off. Rose stirs from the place he's kidnapped her, the Boy eyes the watching Doctor, smiles and then bites into Rose's arm. He has been waiting for her blood not her love.
The Doctor screams in anger and attacks him. The pair fight, the Doctor slamming the Boy into the wall, he manages to throw him off and in turn slam the Doctor against the wall - trapped. But then the sun rises and fills the room and he bursts flames.
The Doctor watches the fire and Rose slips into unconsciousness. Rose flashes through images of the Boy sucking her blood, vampires, compares the Doctor to the Boy, all as she lies asleep in hospital. The Doctor waits anxiously for her to awake and she finally does.
Happy ending :)
It is not Edward Cullen from Twilight because:
1) He's more evil and dark
2) He can't go into sunlight because he WILL die
3) He's alien!
I apologise to Twilight fans for using Edwards image, I'm as much a fan as the rest of you. :)
Enjoy!
Waww :|
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IT IS EDWARD!! SHEESH
bobmarlyfan96 1 year ago
@bobmarlyfan96 Actually, I only used the image of Edward Cullen, the aim of the challenge was to create a new character, so I made a evil vampire :) who's waaaay more evil than Cullen :) x
Doctorwhofan001 1 year ago 6