Yea, I would like to start with the simplist idea of a story. ie. Hey Bro, I love you Dave, but you breath stinks. Dave quickly gets some mouthwash and corrects the problem. End of story.
What would be the next complexity. or next more complicated story.
This is not really a critique, only a suggestion. I think most people, especially here on Youtube, that are interesting in learning how to write are young, like around 14. Although, I understanding everything you are saying, they might not. Explaining things in a more simple fashion might be helpful.
In my best Mr. Spock...."Interesting"
SuperFelatio 5 months ago
Yea, I would like to start with the simplist idea of a story. ie. Hey Bro, I love you Dave, but you breath stinks. Dave quickly gets some mouthwash and corrects the problem. End of story.
What would be the next complexity. or next more complicated story.
Fudruckus 2 years ago
thank you, that was good!
blake112x 2 years ago
This is not really a critique, only a suggestion. I think most people, especially here on Youtube, that are interesting in learning how to write are young, like around 14. Although, I understanding everything you are saying, they might not. Explaining things in a more simple fashion might be helpful.
architectus777 3 years ago