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On Some Real Shit...From Tha Heart ---
ill never forget that DAY, when your mom "Snatched-You-Away"
the PAIN, an tha RAGE, i feel "Trapped-In-A-Cage"
the closest? i get to you, is to "Speak-On-Tha-Phone"
i feel "Weak-And-Alone" cant "Even-See-You-Grow"
i dont hate your mommy, baby, she told "People-Evil-Lies"
ive gotta act brave, pumpkin, know one can "See-Me-Cry"
cause it hurts deep down, when she "Stabbed-Me-In-Tha-Heart"
but i promise you baby, that "Daddy-Wont-Be-Far" ©
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growin ups hard with no dad to tlk to never there for me but now he wnt 2 haha hes funny imma make it on my own i dnt want no money dnt even call my damn phone im done with u they say forgive and forget i forgive u but ill never forget all the shit u put me thru not callin for months and months sayin u didnt hve a fone but jenny called me the wife u always called a cunt haha she left u 2 i think thats pretty funny kinda like how u left me when i was 2 while my nose was runny
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Hey listen, I know life could be a mess but please dont stress best believe you gotta live, and dont stop you must come out on top for your future awaits so get your things straight or not
and yes, youll be falling down but youre the king
and whats a king without his crown?
yeah, puts you to think right?I know,
Ive been through your situation but you must come down to earth
down here to your station
but feel free to keep your imagination as youll need it for the path youre walking
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@scorpiofromjiggacity im not usually a fan of ppl rapping to instrumentals via youtube, but this was deep. this was really good. have u ever written, or considered writing, poetry? it seems to me like u have a lot to be said, a lot to be read.
keep smiling.
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i know lucifer has me under his eyes wrapping is hands around my life waiting to claim his prize no one ever seen my tears no one ever heard my cries no one has acknowledged me until tonight deep down the dark cold hudson river is were my body lies so here is the letter to you all no its not fake no its not lies this is my life in a few words this is how i feel inside keep it confidential just you and i
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[Insert Crappy Freestyle Here]
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@YunG22DiZZY alot of people feel the same way
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everything fallin apart crumbing beneth me is the floor cracking up i dont have belf in me any more i feal like im being queezed till i can't breath then i cant give you the raw my speeling suck's and i trying to reach for a star im so close yet again im so far i fight my way to saying im the best now in your view i feal and im at rest im a have a heart attack im a go in a cardeck arest an when i flatline they know i muder ther best
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Sometimes I wish I was a writer,a fighter, My flow a little tighter,spit lyrics like a spider spins a web, but instead, I shake my head in disrespect at what I said, They aren't impressed,yet again,I could really use a friend, who isn't going to condescend, tell me how my lyrics are shit, I'll never make it big, Quit tryin to pretend, But before my legacy ends, it first has to begin, so I'll keep trying, and I'll keep flying against the wind, and I'll keep rhymin,and keep timing with Eminem,



Im walkn , walkn down a road , No end and im feelin cold
Need a coat might catch a cold
Oh wait no body cares
Pain so deep penetrates my soul , No love and they wonder why im cold
I been told , Keep yo head high.
Like Tupac said Real eyes realize real lies
Im gonna climb to the top , even though im feelin dead inside.
Even though i shed tears im alright
Its me against the world
Gettin hard to breath , Like the world is on my Should-ers
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