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- Fumble out of bed and stumble to the kitchen, pour myself a cup of ambition and yawn and stretch and my life is a mess and if i ever make it home today god bless -
*scratches*
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@WeRcod well, just focus on the chorus if you're having trouble following the more complex parts. i made that one simple for people that are past 2 fast.
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someone please tell me how to make this video!!! :D
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love this shit
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perfect song with a perfect video!
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Nice video
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Someone told me that Mac Miller was a lyrical mastermind. I told him to fuck off and showed him this song.
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i love the enthusiasm, this is a great video.
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What program did you use?
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Loved it well done
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This is outstanding! If you are looking for actual constructive feedback, I have 2. The background talking at the begining you should use the fade effect you had on "Fumble out of bed . .". Also, I think the "This old Pompei impression . . " line probably should be broken into two parts. Those are minor things, however. Outstanding.
1Faer 5 months ago
@1Faer I appreciate your feedback, thank you. And I understand your point about the first spoken lines (btw - did anyone understand what he says right before the regular lyrics kick in? It bugged me lot that I had to leave it out) and I think I agree. Not sure about the second point though, but then if I did it again today I would probably make different choices anyway. So yeah - nice to see someone cares. :)
isorede 5 months ago
the lyrics at 1:09 are "make a move pause make a move break cannon, bend barrel one eight zero u-turn squeeze end it"
dope way of describing suicide
realsiq 5 months ago
@realsiq thank you - you're right, somehow that part must have slipped my attention when I went over it with the "official" lyrics booklet. and it makes much more sense. too bad you can't update video material here like you can on vimeo.
isorede 5 months ago
its nothing to do with how fast you can read, the point of a lyrics video is you can read them while the song is going on. for this its 2-3 seconds too late. you could easily have timed it so everyword was the the screen on time. good song, bad video
Schmooblywoo 8 months ago in playlist hiphop
@Schmooblywoo man, thank you so much for revealing the point of my video to me and how easily i could have done it differently if i had wanted to.
isorede 8 months ago 5