Snowmen - - Original

Here is an original that i wrote yesterday. I decided since folks on youtube are absolutely ruthless, that i'd like them to tell me what they think. There's a chance that it's not finished, but i dont really know. I just don't know.

Trapped inside your cupboard you have always wanted more.
Close your eyes maybe you'll find what you've been searching for.
She's at home drinking whiskey and she's passed out on the floor again.

The room is spinning circles as she begins to cough.
Her mother drank like she does, and her father had it rough.
She's struggling her hardest but she can't seem to fight off the men.

She wastes every minute building snowmen out of cans
I can't believe this is real, and we are doing this again.

You've been locked out of your bedroom since the night before
Something tells you the heartbeat below your stomach should mean more.
Your brain it keeps telling you you'll always be a whore.

La la la

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Joe
• McDermott
• joes
• Red
• guitar
• original
• acoustic
• pretty
• ugly
• snowmen
• out
• of
• cans

[carolineandkristen]

this is amazing! love your song sooo much! i listen to it everyday while im on facebook. i hope you get recognized because i would buy your music! you have talent.

[JoesRedGuitar]

amazing, huh? wow thanks a lot! i dont know if you've checked out any of my other originals i have on here, but i added a song called nervous a few weeks ago and its what i consider to be at least in the top 5 songs that i've written.

[ImForGoodMusic]

I've watched your other stuff, and I think I'm going to take this song, and make it good. So expect to see it on a great show like MTV or something, only you're not the one playing it. And it's actually good.

PS. You're not too shabby.

[JoesRedGuitar]

ya know, i just dont have a clue what you're trying to say :-\

[ImForGoodMusic]

I'm just messing around with you. It wasn't bad.

[JoesRedGuitar]

ohh i see, i se. very well then. thanks

[zzmonk85]

dude!!!!

[JoesRedGuitar]

best song in a long time, huh? Geeze thanks a lot! I don't get compliments like that often!

[EW0Canuk]

best song ive heard in a long time man, its amazing

[ravenoftheredsky]

You're pretty genuine, dude.