Sailboat (Original Song)

I wrote this completely spur-of-the-moment, and in about 40 minutes. I surprise myself sometimes.

I thought I'd do something slightly different and write this song based on events that haven't actually occurred in my life. So it's fictional for me, but I think (hope) others can relate to it.
Lyrics:
I wish you well
Wonder how long it's been since I knew
It's hard to tell
For minds and time are a thing of the past

Wrinkles reformed
Back to the same old careless smile
My thoughts reborn
I don't love you anymore

Eyes adjust to the sun
To the new reason
And the old hype is nevermore
It's funny how my heart's been
A sailboat now a train wreck then
I'm finally nowhere near the shore
I need no more

The filter's free
But unsaid phrases will always remain
They once were deep
More recently they are loud and cozy

I've gone to sleep
After a prolonged and conscious nightmare
If you don't talk to me
Wouldn't have noticed it anyway

© 2008

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Music

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• alternative
• folk
• guitar
• indie
• music
• musician
• original
• roonilismyking
• Sailboat
• singing
• song
• songwriter
• voice

[foreverandalwaysdork]

BORING!!!! come on the people want some hip hop not this depressing crap....

[Blubikmike]

Very nice :D / every listen reveals something new & interesting.

[fairyatluvland]

chords please?

[laugherlover18]

this is absolutely beautiful. amazing job! :)

[Oswlek]

Captivating. Sweet melody over a simple yet enchanting guitar progression.

Excellent work.

[PurpleHazeGoofyGrape]

Very nice song, luv it. awesome lyrics!

[smithguitar28]

cute x

[meekiyas]

i would do any thing to be able to play a guitar like you do. awesome sone btw.

[Creepysuitguy]

I DIG IT!!!

[DAVIDDAMIENR]

Very Nice.

DDR