This documentary would be better if we had seen 1. Who was talking, and 2. Cut-aways to what/whom they were talking about. For example, the guy with guitar didn't make sense in the shot until the very end.
Watch your headroom. You often had far too much space above people's heads as they talked.
With careful cutting, more planning, and some extra shots, this documentary would have been amazing. I'd love to see it put together with a little more effort and time put into it. -Luke
This documentary would be better if we had seen 1. Who was talking, and 2. Cut-aways to what/whom they were talking about. For example, the guy with guitar didn't make sense in the shot until the very end.
Watch your headroom. You often had far too much space above people's heads as they talked.
With careful cutting, more planning, and some extra shots, this documentary would have been amazing. I'd love to see it put together with a little more effort and time put into it. -Luke
TomySky 3 years ago