My Immortal Chapter 3
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150 points from Slytherin!!!
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Who the hell tells their date that someone else is hot???
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THIS.
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if she is applying TONS of eyeliner... wow... her eyes must be tired, which would explain her bad writing.
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If Mary Sue was an apple, Draco would be all up in that shit
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I'M SMOKING DRUGS!
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ohmahgoodness, the monty python moment at the end was priceless
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[nerd rage]ok, ok, ok, i can tolerate the horrible writing, the abissmally wrong stuff about being a vampire and trying to make herself as a frikken hot girl, and well, she adding the bands she likes, but one thing is for certain, if she ever read the books, and liked them and placed a little attention in details, she would know that Draco would never ever even get NEAR a damn car, he hates EVERYTHING muggle...
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God dammit, we get it you like black and generic hot topic clothing! D:
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gahhhh this makes me ashamed to be a into some of the bands i listen to and kinda gothic. this girl has ISSUES!
I don't know whether I should laugh or cry at the horridness of this shit.
Love the way you read it, though.
AyunadirProductions 2 years ago 91
it's ridiculously hard to defend goths and emos with this crap on the internet xD
apusama 1 year ago 66