Sylvia Plath's Daddy
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also work on your german sound, "ich" "Luftwaffe" "Dachau" "Auchwitz" "Belsen" "Meinkampf". i'm not giving you notes because this matters, it just looks more professional when you honor the pronunciation of the words the author uses
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the line is "to get back, back, back, to you" and the word is swastika, not shwastika, taroc, not tarot (in the poem) some more notes on word notes, and i guess the nine years is personal and will have to be excused, don't know much about you so i can't judge to much, but overall good and entertaining, though a little bit hokey at times especially the beginning telephone conversation, and the tarot pack, also, memorization is your friend… i give constructive criticism, not flowery garbage
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I really liked this :)
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shits crazy.
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Mandem aint gonna lie. Shes a topLAD.
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@COELHOBOII1993 what guy? post a link, ima favorite that shiz
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@zach700940 i still would.
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@MrBenenenenen i know its all about that blac guy who reads it out, what a lad!
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This galdem is producing pure bantiful banter. She has the BANTERFACTOR.
shes dead get over it
COELHOBOII1993 1 year ago 5
This is so dirty, when my mum walked in I swiched onto porn
MrBenenenenen 1 year ago 2