First Song On the Ukulele- & I Need Your Help!!!

hey all, many points to get across-

1) i want you to help me name this song! i have no idea what to call it! after listening to this a million times, i'm thinking "The Secret"

2) please give me your honest opinions about the quality of the song. i personally feel there is too much reverb going on (partially because i don't know how to tone it down, i'm still getting used to pro-tools), but i want your opinions about quality so i know what to improve.

3) also, any suggestions about the structure of the song. i am so thrilled with how this turned out because i'm playing both guitar and ukulele, but i was wondering if there is anything i should add... like handclaps? haha.

4) i am aware of the volume fluctuations of the vocals.

just let me know what you think! this mp3 isn't final but i was just so excited to share this with you! my first song on the ukulele :) hehe!

CF


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copyright... me :)
ukulele, guitar, (shaker!)- me!
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my hands are tied behind my back
theyre holding a promise i swore not to tell
but you know me so well

i cannot let you in any farther youve already over-welcomed your stay
but its not my nature to push you away
so ill just grow quiet everyday

because my face is turning blue
you know theres something that im hiding from you
but you know how they say,
"what they dont know doesnt hurt them"
how is it that youre hurting
the more i grow silent

my feet are glued into the ground
but i want to get the hell out of here
but youve stunned me with the boldness of fear
the boldness of fear

something cornered me and theatened me not to tell
im sorry but i hope thats okay
oh well

i swore to this little voice that i wouldnt cave in
theres nothing you can ever do to ever win

i wrote it on a piece of paper and ate it for dinner

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• cassandra
• farrar
• cassjamminx
• ingrid
• michaelson
• ukulele
• guitar
• folk
• original
• song
• tristan
• prettyman
• jewel
• taylor
• swift

[StoughtonVikingSk8er]

Oh my gosh girl, words cant describe it: BEAUTIFUL,and AMAZING MUSIC TALENT. You are indescribable.... Where can I get a MP3!!! im dying for it!! please if it wouldn't be to hard, may i have one?

[cassjamminx]

@StoughtonVikingSk8er

You will SO be able to get an MP3 fairly soon! My new album comes out next month (tentative to change) and this song is on the record :) I'll keep you posted! Keep checking back for updates, be sure to sub.

[Tara2372]

Names- Silent Treatment, The Secret Silence, You don't need to know, Hidden, or Bottled up Inside. This song i really good! I wish I could get it on my ipod!

[sheelow1994]

Dude, Dude, I wish I could put this on my iPod, it makes me happy! [:

You're amazing, and I hop you get far!

[candasse119]

This is so adorable. Uke chords, please?

[dodders79]

you don't to improve it's beautiful as it is

[StoughtonVikingSk8er]

@cassjamminx AWESOME!! im so glad (; where can I get it from?

[StoughtonVikingSk8er]

@cassjamminx AWESOME!! im so glad (; What is it called??

[StoughtonVikingSk8er]

Oh my gosh girl, words cant describe it: BEAUTIFUL,and AMAZING MUSIC TALENT. You are indescribable.... Where can I get a MP3!!! im dying for it!! please if it wouldn't be to hard, may i have one?

[StoughtonVikingSk8er]

you are AMAZING!! and gorgeously beautiful!! (:

[Tara2372]

Great Job!