DSPiiZe Paid Dues 16 (w/ Beat)

Not my best quality audio but figured i'd drop it on a beat anyway...its Over Marco Polo's - War Instrumental
We're lost within this cycle
of 9 to 5 disciples
that waste their days
with paper weights
and aging claims to file
we replace our rage with smiles
and semi idle gestures
that help to hide the pressure
the anxiety and the tremors
in this paper chasing
race thats based
on frays of final efforts
we're punching clocks
to kill the time
until something pops
and brings your mind
to halt and stop
before you reach
the unemployment line
simplistically expendable
with plausible excuses
the useless branch that snaps
to lapse the corporate tree from blooming
we're all human beings
that spend a days
depressing wage
in loom of being a being
that we're not used to being
we're competing to exceed
with no incentive to recieve
for this vocational fleet
theres no verbiage to encourage
no motivational speech
just an attainable grief
that leaves you stressed and left
with debts and death to achieve

Category:

Music

Tags:

• DSPiiZe
• Paid Dues 16
• Dumbfoundead
• HipHop
• Unsigned

[KoreanKougar]

the ONLY thing that i find kind of bad is that you emphasize syllables that shouldn't be there...

your line construction is a little iffy is all i'm sayin bro.

good job, otherwise.

[dspiize]

@KoreanKougar

thanks i appreciate it,i did kind of rush the audio.the original accapella i submitted came out better in my opinion.

[Surgicaldamage]

@dspiize U speak my mind. smashing rap

[KungFatty]

too sick

[DevilzSpeciez]

GODDDAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN­NNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!

SOUNDS even doper with a beat!

[krillansavillan]

sick lyrics and sick presence.

[LORDZERO777]

O.O!!! FUCK YEAH!!

[POTENCIAINCISIVE]

damn!

[TOKENOFTHINICE]

Ha Ha now see here we go! Nice work

[CeSektion]

illlll