Okay im really sorry about the title issue i had to change it because it didnt go with what i was writing.
Sorry!
Okay this is my first video/ slash fanfic hopefully you guys like it so far i will add more characters and such in the video along with the story. :)
Carmens POV
Auntie Rosetta: Carmen come down stairs its time to eat.
Hi my name is Carmen i live with my aunt and uncle down in Tennessee. Here is the hole story on how I ended up with them.
*Flashback-1 year earlier*
The start of a new school year and my mom was taking me to get school supplies since I was going to start school in two weeks. My dad died when I was just five years old, so my mom has been taking care of me ever since he died. As my mom and I finish getting my supplies, I noticed something very strange and shadow like lurking in the corner where the carts are, (a/n they are at target) , so I ask my mom this:
Carmen: Mom may I go to the stand outside and wait for you to get done shopping? This store is freaking me out!
Carmens Mom: Sure but wh- she notices the shadow in the corner and says, Ohhhhhh I understand now okay Manny thats fine I will meet out there when I am done.
(a/n Carmen=Manny thats the moms nickname for her)
I was outside the store and was waiting for my mom for like 20 minutes. I had wondered what was taking her so long and then all of a sudden I had heard a scream come from within the store. I walk in the store to find my mom on the lying on the floor with a pool of blood surrounding her cut up body. Seeing her body lying on that floor was the last thing I expected to happen. I noticed a police officer talking to one of the cashiers and walked over to him. I thought I would tell him what I knew about my mother, the one dead.
Officer: so you have n- WHOA! Oh hi sorry little lady Im kinda busy.
Carmen: I know the person who was killed if that helps at all?
Officer: I see and who is this person?
Carmen: Her name is Gretta Rose Montoyata. She is my mother.
Officer: Wow what a name. I am so sorry for your loss. Question for you Ms. Montoyata would you happen to know what killed your mother?
Carmen: *she thinks back from just a few minutes ago when she saw the shadow* I really dont know what killed my mom but I think it had something to do with a shadow that we saw. It was over there by the carts earlier before I left to wait for my mom outside. The shadow was thing that made me run out of the store.
The officer and I were talking for about 2 hours so that way he could get a decent amount of information on the case.
*Flashback ends- the date is now September 16, 2006*
Thats how I ended up living here, since they are basically my only family I have left.
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Thats it for now tell me what you think I would love to hear your comments!
10 comments to continue story.
i dont get it. it's stemi which is sterling and demi combined so if its stemi then u should use their normal names
chadandsonny4eva 1 year ago
@chadandsonny4eva i used other names because i didnt just want to use their original names because i wanted to put a little bit more creativity into my storys.
StemiStorygrl9211 1 year ago
thats my fave band next to devil wears prada
channylovestory 2 years ago
thats awesome!!!!!:)
StemiStorygrl9211 2 years ago
i just read this story.
and i think it's great.
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i see that you like metal rock.
what's your fav. band?
StemiStories15 2 years ago 2
thanks!!!!!!!!!
and yes i do
mine would have to be killswitch engage
StemiStorygrl9211 2 years ago