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Uploaded by bobbinthreadbare on Mar 2, 2008
My entry in the 24-Hour Christian Filmmakers contest.
Film & Animation
Standard YouTube License
I'd have liked to see more life/experiences/love between them. As it is, the whole thing feels long and disconnected.
I would love to see more of this idea played out. It would be awesome, but production time seems to have made it impossible for you to pull it off.
I like it when people use more artistic passages, but that requires more production value.
Keep it up. You have something there, just not the time to pull it off here. -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
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I'd have liked to see more life/experiences/love between them. As it is, the whole thing feels long and disconnected.
I would love to see more of this idea played out. It would be awesome, but production time seems to have made it impossible for you to pull it off.
I like it when people use more artistic passages, but that requires more production value.
Keep it up. You have something there, just not the time to pull it off here. -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago