LAYAS (I-Witness) Docu fest Part 1 of 2
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maganda ung docu nyo pero inappropriate ung title sa ginawa nyo. pero two thumbs up p rin.
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One more thing, I think you've got a great idea but maybe it's your subject that it's not quite helpful or interesting. Other than the fact that she has psoriasis, raising her niece, and panhandling parang nothing else relates to your subject na layas. I think there are better subjects with more interesting,compelling stories and struggles. I'm sure there are alot of layas who endured severe abuse & found the life in the streets more comforting. Idea is great, just needs tweeking. :)
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Impressive for students. If I may, I just have to comment that you're trying to connect too many subject matter into this short documentary. Parang biglang na-introduce yung mga OFW issue out of nowhere.Maybe you can do an intro about it that will tie it to your closing statement. A little editing on the psoriasis and just say it's not contagious and more on why people make layas. Para kasing layas is your subject but it was just breeze through. Overall y'all did a good job.
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@direkjethrorimaxfilm: I think you wont like the story of my life.Pinadala ko ung story ko sa MMK 2 years ago but until now wala parin kasi sobrang haba at hindi kasya sa isang kwento lang.Tyaka hindi naman maganda kwento ng buhay ko sa sobrang dami ng hirap na dinaanan ko pati pamilya ko,walang tao na manonood nun :-)
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minsan ang mga bagay na nangyayari sa ating buhay ay resulta lang ng ating mga ginawa dito sa mundo....
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OMG!! sa totoo lang. simula bata pa ko laking maynila din ako. at marami na kong nakitang ganito. naiiyak ako lagi tuwing nakakakita ako ng ganito. hindi ko rin alam kung bkt eh. lagi ko sinasabi, pag nakagraduate ako, babalik ako ng pilipinas para lang magtayo ng faundation oh makatulong sa mga taong ganito. grabeh!! nakakatunaw ng puso eh. thanks poh. keep up the good work. be a good examplpe ng youth ntn.
Gusto ko itong kwento nyo kahit bago palang kyo.Siyempre hindi naman maiwasan ang may mali kasi nga hindi naman edited ang ginawa nyo tulad ng mga totoong documentary.Pero magaling parin kayo kasi nga alam nyo kung ano ang itatanong nyo at kaya nyong pumunta sa mga lugar na hindi naman lahat ng tao pumupunta dun.Pagpatuloy nyo lang kasi darating din ang araw madidiscover din kayo.Thank you very much for uploading this video.
MartyrWife 1 year ago
@MartyrWife maraming salamat po martrywife. mukang interested po ako sa buhay nyo.. i would like to make a story or documentary about ur life... sana i im welcome to have an interview with you.. tnx
direkjethrorimaxfilm 1 year ago
ok sana ang dokyu nyo but! may konting problem pa kayo sa pag deliver ng story! keep up the good work mga tol! and dont remove a bad comments! kasama sa parte ng ng pagiging journalist yan! kasi if you remove a comments mahahalata na nag sstart pa lang kayo! is pikon na agad kayo sa intriga! nice one guys gustp ko ang storya nyo!
ponkoloits 1 year ago
@ponkoloits tnx thol..
direkjethrorimaxfilm 1 year ago
We are encouraging everyone to watch the part 1 of 2 of this documentary.
"don't judge the book by its cover.."
direkjethrorimaxfilm 2 years ago
may nakuha bang recognition ang dokyung ito? o, dokyu nga ba ito? sa palagay ko, isa itong halimbawa ng HILAW na pamamahayag. Suriing mabuti ang script, walang pinatunguhan. ang isyu ay kay aling nida, napadpad sa mga nadaanan nilang pulubi na dapat ay halimbawa lang. at sa bandang huli, isinali na rin ang mga OFW. wala akong makitang koneksyon o sense man lang sa dokyung ito. i hope that u would take my critism as positive as i would like to sound. thanks!
anastaciojcruz 2 years ago
as what i've said we are not a media practioner. and this is our first documentary ever. the connection between aling nida and the ofw is that the life of aling nida is simmilar with the OFW. hindi naman literal na ung sakit nya ay kagaya ng sakit ng OFW kundi ung pag layas ni aling nida para humanap ng magandang buhay ngunit siya ay nabigo. that was sept 2008.
thanks mr. ANASTACIO J. CRUZ. but please before you react please watch and understand it first.
direkjethrorimaxfilm 2 years ago