Come To Me / DEMO (By: Tyler Wayne Thompson & Tom Jensen) EDITED

This is the edited version of my original song, "Come To Me". The lyrics were edited/co-written by Tom Jensen (poemsbytom). Thanks for checking it out!


COME TO ME

The day that I first saw you,
I knew you were the one.
And when I fell asleep that night,
Through my dreams we'd run.
But it really hurt so bad,
When I saw you with him.
I could tell that you were sad,
I saw the bruises on your skin.

I know you needed me,
Like I needed you.
You longed for love,
Cause you were abused.
That night you cried,
From his temper and remarks.
Oh, the flame had died,
And left you in the dark.

So come to me,
And I'll show you,
What love's supposed to be.
Break loose from the chains he bound you to,
And set your spirit free,
So you can be happy,
And know what life can bring.
Run away with me.

(Instrumental Interlude)

Oh it really hurt me bad,
To see you there with him.
I could tell that you were sad,
I saw the bruises on your skin.

I know you needed me,
Like I needed you.
Your eyes needed love,
Cause you were abused.
That night you cried,
From his remarks.
Oh, the flame had died,
And left you in the dark alone.

So come to me,
And I'll show you,
What love's supposed to be.
Break loose from that ball and chain he gave you.
And set your spirit free,
So you can be happy,
And know what life can bring.
Run away with me,
Come to me.


Lyrics: Tyler Wayne Thompson & Tom Jensen
Music: Tyler Wayne Thompson

Category:

Music

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• Wayne
• Thompson
• Come
• To
• Me
• Demo
• Tom
• Jensen

[madeinedmundston]

i heard some Elton Hook in there...that's good,just don't pollute yourself to much,but man thats is some exellent stuff,i'll heard you in radio in a while....i'm sure.Hello from Canada!

[TylerWayneThompson]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like my music. Go to my channel page, and you can find some better quality songs with video's, lol. Take Care!!!

Ty

[mistasista1]

thanks for adding me dude. These are great tracks. I do agree with poemsbytom on this one :)

[basasa5]

Very nice song!! Greetings from my whole band from Croatia.

[idasputem]

Great song, too many women are abused.

[Greekpeople1]

Beautiful :) As always

[poemsbytom]

maybe change second lyric of bruises on your skin to something else...not sure...

[bios36]

Congrats to both! Very good!

Rick

[christopherinsc1981]

liked it

[poemsbytom]

We're in pretty good shape here Tyler....I can already see a few small lyrical tweeks....Break lose from the chains he bound you to - we should cut that down by a few syllables...But it really hurt so bad - kinda a weak lyric - we could strengthen it. We'll attack it tomorrow. If anyone has any other advice please share......this is a demo.