Congrats! Match the table setting to music. shot of her happy then down about waiting. need a bit more waiting clips before she takes food to establish passage of time. Shorten walk to the table by him. when she gets the dish - cut aways - his face, cu of the dish, cu him kissing her hand - her reaction. Want to see her face on that's not what burns. Over the shoulders or Cu at the table will bring them together. Use the wide shot for a relief in the tension. Ohhhh I wanted to see an ending.
Congrats! Match the table setting to music. shot of her happy then down about waiting. need a bit more waiting clips before she takes food to establish passage of time. Shorten walk to the table by him. when she gets the dish - cut aways - his face, cu of the dish, cu him kissing her hand - her reaction. Want to see her face on that's not what burns. Over the shoulders or Cu at the table will bring them together. Use the wide shot for a relief in the tension. Ohhhh I wanted to see an ending.
cdevact 6 months ago