A Broken Heart (poem)

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Why did you have to go away?
Is there something I did to make you feel that way?
Now I feel so dead inside.
Sometimes I just can't help but cry.

Now I have to face the day
To pretend that I'm okay.
I have to get used to you not being there.
Now and then it's just too hard to bear.

It's hard to admit that you're gone.
After sleepless nights, I welcome dawn.
Were you really real or just a dream?
It looked so real, or so it seems.

They say that a broken heart is hard to heal.
I never realized it, but that truth is real.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• classical
• love
• sad
• broken
• heart
• song
• music
• piano
• poem

[ShatteredPuzzle]

I'd change "seems" to "seemed" but this is really good! Five stars.

[cocoloco246]

ah, grammar never was my forte! thanks for watching!

[GTAspelaren]

Ehm, wait a secound I have heard this one before? Have you really wrote it ALL ?

Or can it just be some likeness between them. Still Im sure I have heard something very similar to this, I can still remeber it because I think of it every day... :'(

[cocoloco246]

i promise you, it's all original work, but you have to remember that sometimes people go through similar pain. so yes, you probably have heard a similar poem to this before. i hope you liked it anyways!

[swishabiz]

Love is like the wind, Though u cant touch it, But u can always feel it, Love is carry by your touch, Everytime you touch, everytime you stand by me i feel the warm air, Everytime we fight, everytime you yell, i just wanna break down, But all of these fight cant win our love, Love is stronger then anything, To prove you my love is true i'll travel the sea, Make no mistake, Search the anywhere, give you back your dream, And go to hell with you to prove you my love is true. This is mine

[cocoloco246]

that's beautiful. is it from a true life experience?

[TheDreemgirl]

wow....such a heart touching poem..

[ToteTaube]

She doesn't know how much i think about her. And she doesnt feel the same about me. I think I'm in love with her but I'm scared of being turned down. I just want to be there for her, but I guess now I never can be. Loved the poem - means a lot. sorry about moaning, i just had to get it out my system...

[scar1467]

I just wish that he'd come back to me. That he could realize how much I love him. I tell everyone I've gotten over him, but what they don't know is that I spend day and night thinking about him, crying over him, and wishing he was here. I can't believe that he's gone. I just want him to wrap me in his arms and tell me it will be okay, even though it's not. I'm so sad. All the time. I just want him back. Please.....

[umairbinmalik]

waoooo

[MsKhryz]

:( upon reading some of your comments, somehow it makes me feel good knowing that IM NOT ALONE HAVING A BROKEN HEART:(

[solitajre222]

"After sleepless nights i welcome dawn..."

Oh how i know that! *im crying* and yeah, guys have feelings too! =,(

[Yamileth1124]

Touching poem:) but true and sad:(

[wordsofwisdom2009]

@happyhiyya Bunny boiler alert!!!! Once you enter her house you never leave!!!!

[kiwifruit44]

even though none of you care....the one true love i've ever had juss dumped me. i do not know why. he told me a few hours ago he loved me...what could've changed that fast? sorry for saying it...just wanted to get it out.

[happyhiyya]

its hard to stop some one going out of your life,we cant becuase if we cant stop anyone comming into your life ,because some time we have to consider ourseleves just an options for others, which they might take it or leave it.

[happyhiyya]

why we cant stop any body going from our lifes, why we are so helpless, some time i remember i couldnt stop him when he came in to my life thn how come i can stop him now, or may be i was just an option for him.

[TheBrothersVideo]

good :(