Good idea, but you tended to tell rather than show your message (which gives your film a "preachy" feel). As you keep making movies, focus on demonstrating your message rather than just having people say it.
I am very glad that you are making movies. Keep it up! -Luke
Good point, flexibility is a huge plus. You might want to have more light next time, some of the shots were a little hard to see. Ridge could give you some good pointers on using shop lights to light your film. Keep it up!
Good idea, but you tended to tell rather than show your message (which gives your film a "preachy" feel). As you keep making movies, focus on demonstrating your message rather than just having people say it.
I am very glad that you are making movies. Keep it up! -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
Good point, flexibility is a huge plus. You might want to have more light next time, some of the shots were a little hard to see. Ridge could give you some good pointers on using shop lights to light your film. Keep it up!
nailspictures 4 years ago
Hmmm... the title didn't quite seem to fit the story and it doesn't finish. Is there an extended version? I'd like to see an ending. :-)
stephennasby 4 years ago
Well put together video! Good job.
DanielGardner 4 years ago
Very lovely concept! I liked it! You might want to talk slower and louder next time, it was a little hard to hear :)
RuthLaroche 4 years ago