DBZ Abridged: beta test Episode 1

alright, we decided to TRY and make our own abridged series of DBZ. We know that it pretty much sux right now, so if ur tellin us it sux, we already know. However, we want to make it better, so if u(the viewers) could tell us(the makers) how to make it better, instead of how bad it sux, then we would really appreciate it. Were not makin this cause we want to be as popular as littlekuriboh, but because its fun and there is so much stuff u can make fun of in DBZ. Thnx alot.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Dragon
• ball
• Abridged
• DBZ
• episode
• one
• Goku
• apples
• Beta
• test

[momentaiwaikien]

Not half bad :) would give you a whole list of things to improve on, but then It'd be too long a comment.

[zineger]

thnx man. if u have time, send me a list of what u think could make it better. it would really help. oh and for those of u that rate us bad, if u could leave us a comment on what to improve on rather than just rating it, that would be helpful

[rickrules11]

to infinity and beyond! lol

[kpbpsw2]

the best DBZ abridged i ever seen. the others on here suck ass

[lKageAkumal]

The voice over sounds forced, try and get a bit more into it, also, try not to use the same clip over and over unless it is ABSOLUTELY necessary for a joke. Finally, don't use other sound effects from movies and shows too much, That makes it sound (and look) like a half assed video. The jokes on the other hand were quite funny at some points.

[DRyuDZero]

i like that guy that does the raditz voice!

[Nick3889]

Well i give it a 4 out of 5 pretty good dude the sudio could be alittle loider and more jokes maybe but still pretty good

[Jatc93]

It wasn't funny, personally. There was one bit that made me giggle (that 'To Infinity and Beyond' one, it was clever), other than that, it sucked. Also, instead of saying 'Scout', you shoulda said 'Gaydar', seeing as the guy was gay :\ And I agree with the guy that says that you should make fun of things at DBZ's expense (though I'd pick a more stupid anime... *points at Pokemon and Beyblade*

[hurugfx]

Its funny just the sound is a bit out. Fix that and I'd gladly watch it :)

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[gameray]

Pretty good. 4/5 stars. You could improve. but it was funny and worth watching

[CelestrialPhoenix]

My biggest suggestion is come up with jokes that actually have to do with DBZ. I'm not comparing you to LittleKuriboh but it would be more funny to make jokes at DBZ's expense(not that there are any :)) rather then ones like "Your mum shops at Walmart" which is kinda lame. Also, dial it down on the audio from other sources a bit. It felt like that was all that was in the test. Well anyway, I'll give full judgment when and if i see an actual episode.