Torn - The Movie (part 2)

I finally finished it! This was a little project I had to do for one of my classes, & this also being my first movie I think it turned out pretty okay, some may enjoy it more than other, some might not.Of course, me being the director of this I am more alert of a few things I'd like to change for upcoming films, if I get the time to make another one. I personally ask you to pay attention to the cinematography I think it looks great for an independent student film. I hope you like it. Enjoy. any comments or feedback would be great. Keep it clean and respectable, hopefully we can all view this as mature future movie makers for any that want to move on in that business. Enjoy.(Click to watch in high quality if you so choose)

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Short
• Film
• Experimental
• Torn
• Hitman
• Anthony
• Vedran
• Liam
• Erik
• Shooting
• Guns
• Fight
• Action
• Suspense
• Independent
• Student
• Movie
• Part

[omgkittymew]

i am talking about him!!!!

[vendetta89]

Lol, ok. Cool cool. Just making sure

[vendetta89]

He actually did respond to. It's just underneath mine his user name as you can see is  FangOfTheWolf

[omgkittymew]

im the one who had lots of pink in my hair

not the extentions, the one with lots of pink.

[vendetta89]

Once again, I think you're talking about Anthony, not me.

[tricksterschoices]

lmao i just saw how long ago it was added! haha, oh dear. my bad.

[vendetta89]

Lol, don't worry. I was well aware of all that you mentioned but thank you though. All those issues were fixed for my other projects but as you can tell this is a while back, however still not too shabby eh? Thanks though

[tricksterschoices]

the close up shots was slightly distracting and a bit jarring. Maybe with a smoother transition it might work?

All in all, I am super impressed. Awesome job guys :) Didn't expect anything less though. You guys always do awesome jobs.

[tricksterschoices]

Yo Vedran, it's Ashley. Good movie. But for constructive cristism. Definitely try and use a tripod next time, especially with the last scene of him getting into the car. I think if it had been a tripod shot right there, oooo epic. The fight scene was shot amazingly though. I had expected pretty good fight hand-to-hand, but that was definitely stellar. One more thing, not sure if you were going for effect or not, but the few black frames when you're doing

[twistedassasin]

5:04 he flinched to soon before being choked

[omgkittymew]

yup