Deejay ?this Spittin' some new written flo's- lyric's in the description read 'em.

Catch me on the cut , it's a done deal.......Over, dj's betta look your shoulder, old shool like a nova, my flo go heavy like a boulder, warm personality is colder, you can watch me drink a soda. I'm down to earth, I'm round the earth, I got it in my hands man, watch me do a hand stand. Musical genius cause I am man, been lovin' this thing since the show a-------merican band stand. I'm up in the sky cause my plane never lands, I'm so study, my brain never crams. I'm so colorful, crayola crayons, I'm better than spring summer fall and winter Namn.

I never stop,I never rock, somthing that's not hot, get it the best you can submit it, and let them dance. Admit it, and always f the critics they never stand for nothin' and you know they can't spit it, so clap your hands. Combustion is what I do, hip hop is what I be, get it, I hope you get it, this thing called artistry. And somethin tells me I eat most mc's cause I heard 'em all and they so easy. With the exception of a few, and that includes me....but I really don't have to rap cuz I'm so musically........gifted and blessed...my flow sick sniff it and rest. When I'm on the mic lyrically fire Smithy and Wess. And it's on tonight pardon me lyrically I digress. 20yrs, with the arts, go head put me to test. Trust me lyrically i will put you to rest. Literally you messin with the best.

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[monra336]

Ur good but u lose the flow about 13 times through the song and u lose the beat ... keep it up i dont want a reply sorry but if u have questions make another vid with everything i told u about the song fixed and then ask me to tell you all about that video... but besides timing and feeling the music is all you have to work on as a musician personally i dislike hip hop but its still music and i love to critique music so yea take that and run with it ... and plz dont comment back

[djquestionthis]

@monra336 timing is everything, you're right....but I think my timing is pretty good...check my other vids...piano playing/scratching etc....my timing is on......now it might not be on every 1/4 note but watch any drummer especially jazz music..they will go in between the quarters and eighths and sixteenths, just makes it more musical......thanks for viewing though and have a great night.

[frequenzT]

to be true...

your lyrics are not really extraordinary, far more pretty standard stuff,

BUT

i really, very like your flow, rapping!

you are quite dope, i guess...

props and love

[djquestionthis]

@frequenzT Thanks for viewing.......I really appreciate that!

[speckyben]

when u started singing i was thinkin this was gonna be some other lame wannabe, when u started spittin though i realised i was way off the mark, shit was tight bro.

defo stick to the rappin, would give the singing a miss next time though :P

im gonna b subscribing, hope for more of this in the future, best of luck to you

[djquestionthis]

@speckyben thanks for checkin' it out..........Imma keep singing though....cuz I love music to much just to rap.....but thanks for viewing...have a great night.

[Scottiebizzle]

that was good... i like the comedy in there too... nice work.

[wcalic]

hey whats good bro just checked out your video and i gotta say... dude you sound like kanye west but you had your own twist on it i thought it was tight man

[speckyben]

@djquestionthis i respect that man, best of luck to you

[frequenzT]

@djquestionthis

for sure, bro...

keep it up