ApologizeTimberland: child abuse dance GCSE practise:

my choreography on child abuse!
:(

(stimulous below)
Misty"

My name is Misty
I'm only three,
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see,

I must be stupid
I must be bad,
What else could have
Made my daddy so mad?

I wish I were better
I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me.

I can't speak at all
I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up
All the day long.

When I awake
I'm all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home.

When my mommy does come
I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just
One whipping tonight.

Don't make a sound!
I just heard a car
My daddy is back
From Charlie's Bar.

I hear him curse,
My name he calls,
I press myself
Against the wall.

I try and hide
From his evil eyes,
I'm so afraid now
I'm starting to cry.

He finds me weeping,
He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault
That he suffers at work.

He slaps me and hits me
And yells at me more,
I finally get free
And I run for the door.

He's already locked it
And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall.

I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues
With more bad words spoken.

"I'm sorry!", I scream,
But its much too late.
His face has been twisted
Into unimaginable hate.

The hurt and the pain
Again and again.
Oh please God, have mercy!
Oh please let it end!

And he finally stops
And heads for the door,
While I lay there motionless
Sprawled on the floor.

My name is Misty
And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy
Murdered me.

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[KATEMURPHY2009]

the tuesday just gone? or next tuesday?

find a stimulous first, do you have one yet, e.g poem?

x

[KATEMURPHY2009]

thank you for the comments! :)

yeahhh sad topics always inspire me to dance and send messages/ emotion through dance and movement!

i'm curently making a routine based on mental illness =//

sure you can use video to show in abuse presentation, no need to ask :))

also if any of you needed ideas or help just comment

and i'll try reply as soon as possibe

xx

[KATEMURPHY2009]

thansk for comments :)

the song is apologise instumental version by timberland

yeahh i enjoyed cheorgraphing this routine! :)

child abuse is a good one to do becuase its full of emotions, this was only a practise wasn't as good as the final piece!

:D

[KATEMURPHY2009]

i'm not sure yet, the women that worked in my class said it could be 30/30

xx :)

thanks

[MegaEstorm]

wow! what did you get ?

[MollyyGee]

this is a really good piece, it shows a lot to do with the subject!

good dancer overall :-)

[bloodpawsdreams]

@tapper1994 no body really knows but the original was called my name is sarah

[tapper1994]

ive used this poem to do you know who wrote it because i dont and you have to give them credit

[HannahElhan]

@KATEMURPHY2009 Only just read your reply to me :) I've just re visted your video. Anyway, my exam has been and gone and I came out with an A for my solo :)

[die2dance]

omg tht was soooooo gd im doin a dance on abuse and tht gave me a few ideas thanx u

[HannahElhan]

My solo is being filmed and sent off to the examiner on tuesday :| I do not have a solo.