I really liked your intro shots. I'm not so sure about the opening the door shot and the lock shot. I thought they could have maybe been a little more quality. Overall for a two min short I thought it was good!
I thought it was pretty cool mate, don't think you needed the bit at the end, after the cubical grab. I really liked the opening establishing shots paticularly your very first one. I thought the cubical lock shot was a bit naff and i felt hard to feel sympathy for your victim as he looked like a bit of a psycho himself. Otherwise nice! Shit myself when he grabbed him, nice music too.
I really liked your intro shots. I'm not so sure about the opening the door shot and the lock shot. I thought they could have maybe been a little more quality. Overall for a two min short I thought it was good!
rhbangert 3 years ago 2
Really liked how you filmed it !
MahaManiak 3 years ago 2
nice work
seansshack 3 years ago 2
Nice little short. The music was well integrated with the action. Would like to see more
ceolwulf 3 years ago 2
I thought it was pretty cool mate, don't think you needed the bit at the end, after the cubical grab. I really liked the opening establishing shots paticularly your very first one. I thought the cubical lock shot was a bit naff and i felt hard to feel sympathy for your victim as he looked like a bit of a psycho himself. Otherwise nice! Shit myself when he grabbed him, nice music too.
mattphenomenal 3 years ago 2