A Short Film Based on "Hills Like White Elephants"
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lol at your shoes, otherwise it was good!
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this is still confusing...
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The way they speak helps me understand this more. thanks.
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I agree 100%. she needs tons of work on her acting. she only had her script a couple days before the shoot though and barely knew anyone. frst movie you see. i think if she had more time to work it would have been better. awful job. i agree. Mark is a natural. Jill needs to work a lot more.
p.s. im the chick. dont think i think i was good. haha. needed more time. :) i love the criticism though. keeps me working on my toes. :) peace~ J.
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shout out to deborah diaz and everybody on advance english woooooooooooooo!!!! PUERTO RICO!!!
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Umm where are the hills? u know the ones that look like white elephants?
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Thanks! I like the constructive criticism :)
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I thought the camera work really needed some more juice to it. Some "over shoulder" shots would have really made the conversation more interesting. Not to mention that the entire thing felt dark/under exposed. It felt cold, which was good. But I felt like I couldn't see enough.
Good cast. Well played. However, I thought that Mark was a bit too energized, too intense. His intensity was a bit out of balance with hers. But they both did a good job.
Props.
I think the girl did great btw.
Mikitchenko 2 years ago
hey guys i have a grading for you man- 9/10 women- 5/10 :)
KZM9484 3 years ago
thanks!
Mikitchenko 3 years ago