A Short Story
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how long is china (look at the end)
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1:58 look lol
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What is this song called?
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@xXcracyRainbowXx they are called maplestory characters
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OMG should watch this vid with the pirates of the caribbean theme song
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LOL AT THE FIRST SCENE THE GUY WITH SPIKEY HAIR LOOK AT HIS FACE XD....
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but why lily said it was over he never do anytihing to her?
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Random girl at the end: How long is a china man?
Lol :D
Random guy at start crying: NOOOO I DROPPED MY MUFFIN ; n ;
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Random girl at the end: How long is a china man?
Lol :D
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omfg at the end at that my fav song as independent by webbie
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♥"" Love、、I Like it!!!
asdfghjklzsify 2 years ago 10
haha.. i agree with her!! i also dont have a good talent in writing stories but i still do know how to make one.. ahmm.. like what she said, i suggest you to make sme stories that will suite to your intro. i dont even get the point of pissing out theboy at the first part and then make some weird twist ont he endng.. maybe its better if the girl likes the new guy and something like friendship love.. or something... dont be upset.. maybe it can build up your talent ;) nice vids! :* MORE POWER !!
mariel0222 2 years ago 8