The Thin Red Line - A New Original

Desperate infatuation
and my lonely teenage heart was open wide
awkward conversation
But at only seventeen, I was so shy

I live my life
walking along the thin red line
oh..hoh..

You stole my soul
And only this scar was left behind

And not today
The battle was waged in another time

The wound was deep
And I never crossed
the thin red line

High school graduation
brought a love that left me gnawing in the night

Longing and frustration
And at only seventeen
broken hearts and broken dreams
And I a voice that screamed
Why did you even try?

Chorus

Why did you go?
Why did I stay?
It was so long ago
Still my love, wont fade away

Chorus

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[dbeater1]

just watched into the night you sent ...thought it was pretty cool ..but this ..man you got a really nice voice ,very good range easy to listen to. writing alright to mind if i subscribe?

[JeimusuJones]

Thanks so much! Please subscribe.

[Bloodrushin]

hey... it's BloodRushin. I love your song. The thing is... i love it so much i like to sing it. :) I wish i could sing it with you on a youtube video so my voice could be heard, but you probably live far away, so not possible. i also don't think you would want me to either... People think that 12 year olds are just developing their voices, so no one wants me to be in their band in Montana... it's kinda bad feeling getting rejected for it so many times that it makes you want to stop singing.REPLY

[JeimusuJones]

Keep trying.  Everything your doing now is just a warmup for when you make it!

[Shopaholic871]

stumbled upon this again, randomly scrowling through my Favourites... still amazing :3

[camjamza]

I feel your pain!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the lovely song.

[Easmithv]

How can I get this onto my ipod

[9Anki6]

Oh, this song was really good, man ! Love your voice.

Keep up the good work!

9Anki6

[cetera06]

Excellent my friend!

[Shopaholic871]

wow nice i like it thanks for telln me bout it

[SportyMusician]

Very goood thanks for telling me bout this :)

[0maxmax0]

Great song! Love the melody.

[manatwork101]

great song

[joedruo]

good voice. but the lyrics are AWFUL. utter tripe. to actually have 'high school graduation' as a line.. i mean come on???!!!