CC4 WF

Toastmaster CC4 Speech

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Speech
• Public
• Speaking
• Toastmasters
• Netmasters
• Perth

[davidatshelley]

Thanks Leonor for your feedback. As well I appreciated you calling me on Skype and discussing matters further.

I'm aware that at present my delivery is rather static. I hope that next time I will be more forceful.

[PerthGas]

David, as a Project speech I belive it clearly achived all the objectives.

From a technical point of view there was a loud crash (Glenis in the kitchen?) at one point. There was also an issue with the editing where your face seemed to morph into itself at various points.

Now what about freetoasthost. I think you are harsh, it really isn't THAT bad. You can be creative if you use your imagination.

[alanpogo]

Speech was well constructed and easy to follow. Still an occasional mannerism ("So", to begin a sentence) that you are trying to eliminate! I found your voice rather precious and affected which is certainly not your normal speaking style. Volume was relatively low and I fiddled with amplifier equaliser settings to give the clearest sound. You seem to have resolved the technical problems of film size and aspect ratio. I feel you can sit further away from the camera for the next movie. Alan

[RaganLeo]

David, you meet the objectives of your Project 4 speech. I enjoy they way that describe the Freetoasthoast very effectively and you describe the cons with clear diction. I could hear every word very clearly. Your speech was organised well. You use simple language that everyone can understand. Did not used technical jargon. You used a number of vivid words. I recommend that be more forceful words in your next speech to persuade of all us to get away from the Freetoasthoast. websites.