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Uploaded by on Nov 18, 2009

Please let me know what you think of this essay.

Im always looking for ways to improve. :-)

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  • Damn how did you do all that ur professor X's fav. student u gotta be mutant or something. Is ur powers adding hours to a day, cuz IDK how you could do all that in 24 hours. Man I need whatever energy drink u take and whatever clock u use that adds so many extra hours to ur day.

  • lol there was many a day where i fell asleep in class. I talked to each one of my professors about my situation and a few of them let me come during office hours to get my work and notes so i could sleep. there was a whole team of people helping lol

  • college isnt for everybody. that is a fact. if your a rich kid it is very easy. you only have to worry about passing

  • @The2ndKrezzz3

    I actually think college is for everybody, but not everybody has the opportunity to go. lol I honestly used to be so jealous of other folks that didn't have to work and could focus on school. Then I realized that unlike them, my degree was MINE and mine alone. It was my blood, sweat, and tears that printed that piece of paper. Forget the rich kids because I would rather work for what I get and cherish it.

    lol a little extreme huh?

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  • Maybe considered changing:

    "I'm not looking to have a job, I want a career, and your programme is an entity that can help in that goal"

    to:

    "this programme is more than just a job, it is what i seek most; a career"

  • Honestly, you are talented! Please don't stop dear life at Japan! PLEASE! You are apart of the everlasting youtube family. That's right I said it, FAMILY! We Love You! And yes, your essay and your LIFE is amazing. Stay strong, you are inspiring.

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  • Exellent video. You are really inspiring and I pray you get accepted; they would be crazy not to. I moved from NY to Italy and you have inspired me to push to do big things here. You are wise beyond your years. May the New Year bring you nothing but the best. Ciao!!

  • wow what a great essay. There were a lot of emotions put in to it. God Bless!! and Good Luck!!

  • Your story is sad and epic but inspiring and full of hope. Your so freaking complex ;o) Thanks for such a personal introduction.

  • you are truly an amazing and inspirational person. And they would have to be pretty insane not to accept after hearing that warm, honest and heartfelt essay. good luck :) not that you need it lol

  • you're really a strong person, with a heart like yours I believe you can make it anywhere you want. I really do.

  • it would be great if you did a video on your study tips!!!

  • Do you plan on writing a book about your experience? You should!

  • I just wanted to stop by and say I love what your doing. I have been following your videos since the first one you posted. But, I hardly post a comment until now. I wanted to know what was the name of the artist you used for an opening of one your videos...The song was about going home I think it was from a series.

    If you remember please post back...Thanks.

  • Wow, your essay was amazing. And though I've been watching your videos for a while, though I never knew all of the struggles that you've had to endure in your life. You are an amazing and inspiring person, and they would be crazy not to accept you.

  • you make me want to believe in myself. thankyou.

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