Lord of the Dome: A Short Film - We Make Your Movie

We Make Your Movie Presents... Lord of the Dome.
Based on the short story by Judah Mahay.

We Make Your Movie is a monthly YouTube project where you send in your short stories and scripts. Then we nominate 5 stories. Then you vote for your favourite, and finally we make a movie based on the winning submission.

Send your stories to: wemakeyourmovie@hotmail.com

Read the original story: http://symposium.judahmahay.com/2008/10/lord-of-the-dome/

All music was from 'Liquid Cabaret' by Paul Shroefel, it was made for the public domain.

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Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Lord
• of
• the
• dome
• judah
• mahay
• we
• make
• your
• movie
• contest
• writing
• short
• film
• wmym

[dylanisanerd]

Really good video guys! Production value was great.

Was there a smoke machine?

You guys might want to invest in a boom. It was kind of hard to hear some parts.

Anyways A+ work guys try to get the word out to bigger youtubers, you have a good shot,

[whitefluffyhat]

This was really excellently made! I loved the part with the rat. :)

Good luck with the next one!

[KevinMcGravy]

Yawn.

[deja907]

umm i don't understand why a lot of people think this short film is any good because, the script makes no sense, the following shots are terrible, and the video barely keeps the viewers watching. This movie lacks a lot detail and necessary work to make it a great short film. The only thing good about this film was the effects at least those seemed somewhat real and fit towards the movie.

[beverleykatherine]

this was really awesome!

[losing101]

Oh, and one last thing.

Brad: try to look just a smidge more relieved/happy that the girl's alive. I almost thought you were disappointed! :P

[losing101]

Haha, FANTASTIC first short film :)

If I could nitpick at anything, the rat sequence caught me yawning, and the camera is little jittery at times when it shouldn't have been. Other than that, you guys ALL made excellent acting debuts ^_^ And kudos to the super interesting script! I must say, it's hard to convey such a narrative into a film where we can't hear the Lord of the Dome's thoughts, but you guys did pretty well. Keep up the effort!

[ruelruel14]

Wow, Kai! I didn't know you were that great of an actor. Good job.

[TabbyKate]

....lol, Golum voice Kai's freaking me out a little.

Great movie, amazing acting, u guys are awesome

[HMVNHN]

I didn't understand it but it was very good acting

[Peter5000Films]

Nice job to you guys and Judah