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Uploaded by MsWriteNow on Feb 16, 2008
A poem of TS Eliot and his love, Vivienne.
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MsWriteNow, after this introductory poem, all I could say is... I will be back here, for more.
personalimagery 1 year ago
Bravo on the reading of your poem.
AcidEntertainment 3 years ago
Your voice make my eyes glow.
Not outward but inward.
I can feel my brain slowly thawing.
Your voice makes my heart cry.
Not cry out but that slow trickele of salty water.
It forms a strangely comfortable pool at the bottom of my belly.
PuppyZwolle 3 years ago
This truly reminded me of an old style that used meaning and not metres and rhyme to create beauty. Really successful.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I loved it. Love can describe it. Just one thing: Write the verses in the description area.
maximuswynn 3 years ago
Your voice, as well as your words, are quite compelling.
tjkoz22 3 years ago
Finally got back here to rate this for you and post a comment. Very good I like it, looking forward to the next poem.
smokencoffee 3 years ago
great metaphorical usage here!
Loved it...
very nice..............
PROSHKA
Proshka 3 years ago
Powerfully read and wonderfully written - this was a poetic delight to watch! =)
TheRavenOfPoe 4 years ago
Whoa... great delivery and voice... 5*
DavidRandallCurtis 4 years ago
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MsWriteNow, after this introductory poem, all I could say is... I will be back here, for more.
personalimagery 1 year ago
Bravo on the reading of your poem.
AcidEntertainment 3 years ago
Your voice make my eyes glow.
Not outward but inward.
I can feel my brain slowly thawing.
Your voice makes my heart cry.
Not cry out but that slow trickele of salty water.
It forms a strangely comfortable pool at the bottom of my belly.
PuppyZwolle 3 years ago
This truly reminded me of an old style that used meaning and not metres and rhyme to create beauty. Really successful.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I loved it. Love can describe it. Just one thing: Write the verses in the description area.
maximuswynn 3 years ago
Your voice, as well as your words, are quite compelling.
tjkoz22 3 years ago
Finally got back here to rate this for you and post a comment. Very good I like it, looking forward to the next poem.
smokencoffee 3 years ago
great metaphorical usage here!
Loved it...
very nice..............
PROSHKA
Proshka 3 years ago
Powerfully read and wonderfully written - this was a poetic delight to watch! =)
TheRavenOfPoe 4 years ago
Whoa... great delivery and voice... 5*
DavidRandallCurtis 4 years ago