The BattleCry (Freestyle)

To all those who saw my Addams Family Joint and clowned me and said I should never rap again. This is just to let you know of how I can utilize my talent when I'm being serious...I made the beat and freestyled (just live off the dome) to it.......

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Lupe
• Fiasco
• rap
• hip-hop
• Lil
• Wayne
• Jay-Z
• Freestyle
• Live
• Lyrical
• Spit
• New
• Fresh
• Ludacris
• Canubis
• Eminem
• Talib
• Kweli
• 2Pac

[bhagans]

Preciate the comments. I like to hear criticism that's the only way to get better. And yes I actually did freestyle this, Alot of people lie and pre-think or write. I will upload something I'm working on. I wrote the verse and I put some complicated metaphors in there that some people will probably miss.

[Deron3003]

This shit is iight,you need 2 come hard,im from da south so i feel ya,but come harder. Keep doin ya thing though,u sound like titty boy form playas circle,come wit ur own voice. Keep it goin though.

[punker833]

Dunno why everybody is talkn shit for . the song has good beat and sound and I think you got a good rap and your voice stands out .instead of soundn like every body else . so thats good ... . guess people are hateing cause there mad that you have a talent none of them have

[spiderman7889]

a really really upgraded version of lil wayne.

[robbbyyy25]

i understand that u r influenced by wayne, n therefore i believe u tried to sound like him....but idk wats wrong wit ur voice, and try to sound more complex wit ur words....ur lyrics were cheesy n not much going on. i like the beat, it was ok. keep doing ur thing tho.

[chunkolard]

truthfully, this is a good track. the beat needs work. it sounds really cheezy. good flow. just like a couple others said, you put a little too much emphasis on the words you use. if this is really a freestyle, then you have a real future. if its not, then i would give it like a 7 out of 10. that means you are better than plies or birdman. id give them a 3 of 10. i really like the sound of 3:25-4:00

[2true2real]

I think da flo is kool.Dont think ur emphazing 2much i think that was dun purposefully 2 rip this beat.I myself flo and i say u flowing better then alot of these garbage rappers that are backed by these corporate labels.So keep doin ur thing.

[SomeoneTakeMyIdea]

pretty good make me think of weezy a bit but something in the voice is strange but i think that its just the thing ur using to record that do that. but keep working its nice

[eraContraband]

lyrics are nice

keep workin on it but try complexity for a change. more complicated similes and metaphors

Mixarrow is right, change ya voice.

[Mixarrow]

You are ok.. I dunno about your voice but lyrics are str8..