Dissension - Original Composition (all me)!

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Uploaded by on Feb 10, 2008

This is my first original composition. I wrote every part of the song and the drums too. I think it turned out ok. I've never really tried to write a song before, so any criticisms or compliments are appreciated. Any advice to write a better song is welcome too. Thanks and enjoy!

My hard drive has failed and I am currently working to recover the data. If I can I will be able to offer an MP3 again.

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  • You're to good for youtube dude!

    Start a band and find some people who want to help you to the top!

    Call your band:

    "NShark" :P

  • Let's be real, would you buy a CD of a band named NShark? haha it's just a name I've used forever. But thanks for the compliments! Only problem is not too many of my friends play instruments and definitely not metal. :(

  • If you had a CD I'de buy it man! Keep do the all original stuff, and be sure to trade mark it man! Kudos!

  • I really appreciate the compliment, thank you!

  • What tuning do you use bro?

  • Standard tuning man.

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  • Biggest tip I can give you:

    TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE your instruments. You were a little off the whole time, especially at the beginning. Also, work on your bends. Be a little more aggressive in that department. A lot of your bends were pretty flat. Anyway, if you're looking to start a band, and you'll be in the Houston or the Seattle area within the next year, I'm down. I love metal.

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  • @Nshark I know how you feel I play lead guitar and I want to play metal but my rhythm guitar likes punk the drummer like country and bitches alot we cant find a bass so I might just leave my current band to join a metal band that offered me but they're in another town idk what to do ha

  • :52 is a massive ear-gasm

  • lol how can you know whether the bends are off, he is the one who created them

  • It´s not bad, but the drums are too easy. You know, what I mean. I´d appreciate more original drums. But still good ;o)

  • The only thing missing is a bass guitar. Otherwise awesome work. Well done =D

  • wow this is your own.. didnt read the description nice job dude very catchy. metal =D

  • Awesome just work on your bends that seems like the biggest problem.But it's not that big of an issue because only a couple bends were off.

  • No thanks, I would buy a CD with that name :)

    If you hear the band names lately... NShark doesn't sound too bad.

    It's a pity that you don't have metal loving friends.

    Keep up the good work anyway!

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