It was good! but one question--Why did you get happy when you said you would tell him of hermias flight? wouldnt you be sad because you KNOW that he is going to follow her. If you were to get happy wouldnt it be after realizing that he will never be able to separate Hermia from Lysander and then will have no choice but to come crawling back to you. so you would only be happy when you say the last line. wouldnt making the choice of telling him feel like an obligation because you love him?
Hmmm, I liked parts of this, but I think you got part of the meaning of it wrong. As well, I felt you were "performing" it rather than acting it, if you get me. Wasn't the worst I've seen though.
@nycwrite4life i think it was on purpose.
starlenia 5 months ago
It was good! but one question--Why did you get happy when you said you would tell him of hermias flight? wouldnt you be sad because you KNOW that he is going to follow her. If you were to get happy wouldnt it be after realizing that he will never be able to separate Hermia from Lysander and then will have no choice but to come crawling back to you. so you would only be happy when you say the last line. wouldnt making the choice of telling him feel like an obligation because you love him?
starlenia 5 months ago
you skipped like 6 lines.
nycwrite4life 8 months ago
Luv ur accent hun! but I agree it's like you were preforming..
orhugs 1 year ago
Hmmm, I liked parts of this, but I think you got part of the meaning of it wrong. As well, I felt you were "performing" it rather than acting it, if you get me. Wasn't the worst I've seen though.
lmoxxx 1 year ago
@YackerUK yeah that was quite confusing but the acting was very good
luvieduvie0635 1 year ago
this is very well done but you are missing some of the lines
luvieduvie0635 1 year ago
Forever I've been searching for the perfect one...
U did it!!
Thx so much u were so good!!
TheGfields 1 year ago
This is awesome...it is so natural.
lc1913 1 year ago
you have such a beautiful voice! a very genuine performance!
MissLadyDracula 1 year ago