Great job with all elements of your introduction! I really would have preferred to see you primarily, and just have a glance at your audience. You aren't citing your sources! Make PowerPoint work for you, as opposed to having notes, and handouts should be passed out at the end of your speech. Watch pacing during your speech, and your voice becomes a bit monotone when you read. You handled a very personal topic quite well...your brother would be proud!
Great job with all elements of your introduction! I really would have preferred to see you primarily, and just have a glance at your audience. You aren't citing your sources! Make PowerPoint work for you, as opposed to having notes, and handouts should be passed out at the end of your speech. Watch pacing during your speech, and your voice becomes a bit monotone when you read. You handled a very personal topic quite well...your brother would be proud!
BooChopRock 1 year ago