The Slope of Novelty, a short story by Mr. Ted Suzan
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This video is a response to Charles Bukowski "The man with the beautiful eyes"
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Sir D.A. is laughing. Great Job!
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This is... AWESOME!!!!! You should get this published!!!!!
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That fish can really tell a story. And the tale reminds me uncannily of a strange day spent at a Franco-Italian ski resort in the late eighties.
Splendid!
BTW, is the fish from Canada? The way he pronounces 'o' (in words such as 'novelty' and 'problem') is very Great White Northish...
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I regret not watching this earlier
IO1011 3 years ago
I'm glad to have won your respect; can I stop eating at the children's table this thanksgiving now?
Tedsuzan 3 years ago
that's a really, really good story! and I think the visuals fit. the only thing I would suggest is a hiccup instead of a cough, since the cough sounds accidental, and a hiccup could not be in the context of that story.
nonsensemusic 3 years ago
Thanks! Yeah, I left in the cough because to make the video I had to select all those video clips, and it takes hours to replace them, not to mention the threat of the computer crashing. So, sometimes in my voice overs it's a one shot deal...hit 'record' and hope for the best,lol...
Tedsuzan 3 years ago