A Winter's Dream

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Uploaded by on Oct 27, 2009

A Story i wrote. :D its one of my personal favorites. Enjoy! :D
Btw the picture was supposed to give u a visual of Sadie xD

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  • Hah. thanks. i like it when people criticize. i swear my friends couldnt do it to save their lives. xD ya. i gues your right. to me, what i see first is their hair and eye color. xP but thats just me. i'd love to hear more from you on my other posts. i totally need it :] and ill try to change the music. xD Thanks for watching!

  • A lot of editing and development need to be done...I think when you introduce characters, say something that pops out about them; I noticed you liked to talk about their hair and eyes, but it seems repetitive to me...

    On a diff note: the music distracted me a bit =[ instrumentals, perhaps ? :)

    But anyway, I like it for the most part :)

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