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Part 2
*with nick and joe in the tour bus*
Joe: hey nick, whats up *nick doesnt reply* nick? your not still mad at me are you? cos i dont like it when you are amd, i thought you was gonna hit me earlier
Nick: *laughs* if dad hadnt of came in, i think i probably would of done *looks up* sorry!
Joe: dont matter, so whats up
Nick: nothing
Joe: nick, your my brother i know when something is bothering you
Nick: its nothing
Joe: there is something, is it a girl? miley?
Nick: miley? *laughs* no way! been there done that, aint going back!
Joe: *laughs* so what is it?
Nick: ok this is gonna sound ridiculous, but its hannah
Joe: hannah? the girl that was here earlier?
Nick: yeh, everything about her was just amazing, and when i signed her cd i gave her my IM but i dont know if that was the right thing to do or not
Joe: you gave her your IM, well then go online, she might have added you already
Nick: you think?
Joe: if you like her man, then you gotta talk to her, so its worth a look
Nick: i spose, its worth a try *turns on computer*
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i dont like this ons
its more of a filler, it will get more interesting
im not gonna make it into another one of those really obvious love storys, they bore me!
how many times did i went 'then' in this chapter, lol
must of been loads!
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in part 1 i used it loads!
HannahLovesJbx 3 years ago
yo didnt say then at all in this chapter
melly82192 3 years ago