Too much light. In some cases not enough. In the mirror at the beginning his face is too dark, in the office & other times his face bleeds. Biggest issue though is probably with the camerawork. Needs to be more steady. Also credits at end are too dark on the dark background, too hard to read. Dan's the attorney? He's the one who had the collapsed lung? What came of that, what caused it, how is he now?
Too much light. In some cases not enough. In the mirror at the beginning his face is too dark, in the office & other times his face bleeds. Biggest issue though is probably with the camerawork. Needs to be more steady. Also credits at end are too dark on the dark background, too hard to read. Dan's the attorney? He's the one who had the collapsed lung? What came of that, what caused it, how is he now?
Fatboyqq 3 years ago
This is excellent. It's great, I love it. Very expressive.
Fatboyqq 3 years ago