A Jonas Brothers Story [Fan-Made] Chapter 16

its been ages, but hardly anyone commented
i seriously need comments guys!
oh and im changing the way i write it again, tell me what one you prefer!
4 comments to the next one :)

Chapter 16
As Tina turned on the computer Hannah sighed 'This is pathetic, he won't be online, he just finished a concert he isn't going to want to talk to me anyways'
'I just don't think you undertand the situation' Tina replied, she glanced at the computer screen and saw that it was fully loaded and that AIM had automatically appeared in the center of the screen.
'There is no situation, I'll talk to him tomorrow' Hannah said quickly and then turned around and grabbed a magazine.
'No situation? THE Nick Jonas has given you his IM, most girls would be freaking out right now' Tina practically shouted
'Well I guess im different from most girls' Hannah carried on reading the magazine, pretending not to be interested in what was happening. Tina logged on Hannahs AIM and added Nick's IM.
'Well I guess he's not online'
'What did I tell you?'
'Your always right, I hate you for it'
'No you don't, come on'
They left the computer on and walked across to Hannah's bed, and got out her magazine collection and started reading peoples embarrasing stories.

-With Joe & Nick-
'Joe'
'Yes?'
'Would you quit trying to be interested in my life, i'll log in tomorrow'
'Tomorrow may be too late' Joe grabbed the laptop and quickly logged on to AIM.
'Joe, give me that' Nick made a plunge for the laptop but Joe swiftly moved it just out of his reach 'No way little bro, you are talking to her whether you like it or not!'
'I knew I shouldnt of told you what I did' Nick sat back down next to Joe looking quite angry! Joe saw that Hannah was online and nudged Nick with his elbow then pointed to the screen
'NO WAY!' Nick shouted
'Yes way! I'll leave you to it' Joe passed the laptop to Nick and walked into the bedroom area.

-Nicks POV-
What they hell do I say? This is so pathetic! Should I wait for her to say something? No, no, bad idea Nick! Just start by saying 'Hi' thats always a good place to start a conversation! Right! Here goes.
I typed in 'Hey, what's up!' sent it and then i waited. 1 minute... 2 minutes... 5 minutes. Still no reply, maybe she doesnt want to talk to me, maybe she thinks im pathetic for giving her my IM. I have really screwed up this time havent I. 17 minutes... I couldn't sit here forever. Right I'm going to bed now. I logged off and set the laptop down on the couch and trudged to my bed, I didnt even bother changing, i laid on my bed and simply fell asleep. Hopefully tomorrow would be a better day!

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yeh so whatever, whick style of writing do you prefer?
story style
or play style
please tell me, co si dont mind writing in either and also what would ou say i said i was thinking about writing another story, this one wont stop at all!
i just have a few more ideas for more stories, please let me know.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Jonas
• Brothers
• Story
• Fan
• Made
• Chaoter
• 16
• Nick
• Joe
• Kevin
• Hannah
• Tina

[pepsicokacola2]

story style. its easier to read i think. i write my stories story style [btw plz read mine i love urs and it be awesome if u cood give me some writing advice!] =D

[cutierose1234]

okay im gonna b different nd say story style, i like it, its much more professional lol :)

[kasey545]

play style!

i love this story though its different...

a goo different(lol camp rock)

[IxLiKeGgS]

play style!!

[GiraffePhysco]

play style is way better this way is to complicated to follow but anyways! make them LONGER!!! :P lol i luv them keep em coming! hey at least i'm reading them!