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I'm making this story really REALLY different from the others XD

Maiden Love Part 19

After 2 days we finally were in front of Granwood forest, the king smiled as he got off of the horse, *I didnt came here in ages* I jumped off of the horse and also smiled, I was home.

*I missed it* I said smiling. He looked at me and frowned *lets get serious now* I looked at him with a confused look *what is it ?*

*now that we are here you have to prove me that you really can go through the forest*

*easy* I said I started walking in the forest but his majesty didnt follow me so I turned around *are you coming or not ?* he smiled at me before following me.

It was a wonderful feeling, I was home, I missed it so much, as I knew it wasnt so hard to go through the forest I didnt look at the king while we were walking, I was looking around with a smile on my face.

After half an hour we were finally walking out of the forest, a huge smiled appeared on my face as I saw my house. I ran toward it and quickly opened the door.




But I had a weird feeling, my smile fade and I frowned, I heard steps behind me, the king walked in, *this time I seriously have to believe you, you really were able to go though it easily*

I ignored his comment, I was still looking around and smelling the air, the king noticed it *whats wrong ?* I turned around to face him *arent you smelling anything ?* I asked, he looked at me confused *no* *exactly !*

*what are you talking about ?* I sighed and turned back around *before leaving, I laid my fathers dead body on his bed, it has been nearly 2 weeks, it has to smell* I turned back around to see if he understood.

He nodded as he started walking toward the only door in the house, my fathers bedroom, I followed him *I covered him with flowers and a cover so the smell wouldnt scare the animals around here, but after 2 weeks it has to smell*

He opened the door and we walked in *the cover is still here* he said, I frowned, for sure we were seeing a figure covered with the same cover I used, the king turned around to look at me. *maybe the flowers are still stopping the smell ?*

I shook my head, I was sure of it, something was wrong, I spent my whole life in the forest and Ive already done that a few years ago when my bunny died. I walked toward the figure and grabbed the covers *what are you doing ?* he asked, I throw the cover on the floor and turned around *see I told you* he frowned and walked closer, his eyes grew wide as he saw the sheets who were supposed to be my father.

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  • best writer on YT

  • aww thank you :D but i'm not as good at you

    i love love love your stories <3

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  • I'm scared. REALLY a=scared.

  • Okay,I'm kinda scared now haha

  • amazing

  • love it!!

  • AWESOME!!!!!!!!

  • what happened to the body of her father ?

    Oh god, this is so awesome !

    LOVE IT SO MUCH :D

  • wow is he alive?

  • okay thts just sick who the hell would take a body damn craddle robbers

    nxt 1 plz :-)

  • are you kidding me? your way better than me every story you make is AMAZING

    thnx :-)

    <3

  • Ooooh, they took his dead body? xD

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