Save Me - BRANSCOMBe Original
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I liked it cool sound
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Honestly, the guitar was a 10. Your voice is great, a 9 on the verses. Not crazy about the chorus. The versus were a 9 as far as lyrical quality and melody. Chorus a 5 for it was not real memorable lyrically or melody wise. Not that the chorus was bad....not at all...but the rest is so good and ..."save me" is a bit clique. How about "she say's I'm lazy" or "it's always maybe"?
Ya, try those and let me see the videos! lol
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NICE!!!!!!!
Wicked awesome!
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Honestly, the guitar was a 3. Your voice is terrible, a 2 on the verses. Not happy about the chorus. The versus were a 2 as far as lyrical quality and melody, that of a mute. Chorus a -2 for it will haunt me until i die. Not that the chorus was good.... at all... but the rest is really terrible.... "save me" is a bit douche. How about "she says I'm gay" or "It's always "stay away from me or i'll call the cops"?
Ya, don't try those and stop! lol
bigtallfreak 7 months ago
@bigtallfreak Clever..
BRANSCOMBEx 7 months ago